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remember

I keep sitting there
so I can hear your voice
I think of you and think of you
till my heart cry out
I don't want to say goodbye forever
because I know we will meet again
and soon..

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  • This poem makes me want to cry. So good.

    Your poetry is very good, Aiman.


  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    September 5

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    Very Good

    Are you missing a friend or a family member? Friens come and go but family usually return to where they come from.For your age your writing is good.


  • NarniaKid
    August 29
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    Great Job! I like this! Short and Sweet!

    -Crystal


  • Rameen Arif
    August 27
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    Excellent job! I am impressed.

  • zoralielda
    August 25
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    Good poem

  • C Caulingwoods
    August 23
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    Returning the applauds

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