I keep sitting there
so I can hear your voice
I think of you and think of you
till my heart cry out
I don't want to say goodbye forever
because I know we will meet again
and soon..
What did you think
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This poem makes me want to cry. So good.
Your poetry is very good, Aiman. -
Very Good
Are you missing a friend or a family member? Friens come and go but family usually return to where they come from.For your age your writing is good.

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yes actually remember a person....
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Great Job! I like this! Short and Sweet!
-Crystal
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Excellent job! I am impressed.


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actually I am impressed by you
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Good poem
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Returning the applauds
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