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Too Fat to Fly.



Plod plod, I tread heavily
As other birds swoop merrily,
My head in motion, pecking tasting,
Worms, crumbs and seeds partaking.
Skinny sparrows chatter with mirth
Viewing my, unseemly girth.
I spread in hope my feathered wings
So I can do my aerial thing.
Alas, I sit with a weary sigh,
For I am far... too fat to fly!

Author notes

We were walking through the park and came across this rather rotund pigeon, I walked towards it and he just waddled away, even when pursued he refused to fly.
Not the greatest piece of poetry, but it makes me smile... how about you?...ian.

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  • Dorcha Runda
    August 31
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    Ian I love it! It made me laugh quite heartily! How have you been? I've missed your wise self around here! Great poem!


  • Sinfully Yours
    August 26
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    Quite funny if you ask me! Nicely done!


    • W a s p
      August 29
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      SIN...!

      Thanks for reading... good job you showed up, I've been deserted!
      Take care now you girls, I''ll see you at Christmas...ian.