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Cradle

The ocean rocks pirate ships in her immense cradle of billowing blue.

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    August 28

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    Oooooooh~

    Love the reference to: cradle of billowing blue
    in this one liner~
    sure sparks the Imagination

    Woot~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 23
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    excellent

    Great imagery in this
    Thank you for your entry
    Best of luck in the contest
    Susan~~~


  • individuality gold member
    August 23

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    a good poem, i like the large expanse of salt water which dances from side to side as the robber sailing vessel is softly swayed by the fluffed up colour of the sky in quiet reflection. waves at