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Friend

Such a solid body.
One you can cling to,
and he doesn't mind...
he squeezes back.

youd think he never did
no activity between his ears
but you'd be wrong
that young mind, like a vortex

an old soul
you can tell it by his actions
polite, concise, practiced, measured
but like all virgos, he likes to touch

intrigues my lustiest parts
something caught hold of my heart
must be stuck hard
if I try pulling away, it hurts

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thinking this may be my latest inspiration... : )

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