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Three degree's below freezing

Seven long years since you’ve been gone
Long enough to recover or mend at the least
But I haven’t healed or sewn up my broken heart
I have long sense understood that your not coming home
But that doesn’t make it any easier on me
I can feel my heart getting colder with each day your gone
No amount of heat can warm it up
I blocked off the people I loved the most
Immersing myself in books ignoring those sympathetic looks
My hearts getting colder with each waking step
You were my world, my everything
You were suppose to be there through it all
But instead you just ran away
My entire world shattered to pieces
People tell me I should be over it by now
But they don’t know that you were everything I had
You left me with an alcoholic mom with no source of income
You influenced me to lie, showed me how to steal
You used my room for your drunken friends to party in
Visitation you never came to claiming you had better things to do
But no matter what, I’ll always miss you
And as I watched you walk away that day without a single goodbye I felt my heart shatter like cold glass put in a burning oven
That crack is still in place getting wider and wider to far apart to heal
My heart is now three degrees below freezing

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  • Sheilasbabygal4life gold member
    October 29
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    This was amazing. I enjoyed it. THanks for enteirng and best of luck too you int he contest.


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    October 18

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    So full of pain, and it is easy to see why. I know that cold feeling that creeps into your heart, little by little. Everyday as you find he is still not there, is another scar forever marked on your heart. You should not be over this, it is a very sad thing that you have been put through, and to have to deal with a mother like that as well. Keep strong, and try not to let the wall around your heart become so high that even you cannot get over it, if need be.... ~Angel~


  • WideEyedSuicide
    October 6

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    Wow, that was excellent. That's crazy of all this person has done to you, and you still love them. Thank you for entering and good luck!


  • Menna
    August 30
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    *degrees nothing belongs to the degree. Thanks for the entry, best of luck in my contest

    ~Menna