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This is Me

this is me
look into my eyes
and this is all you see

the one the only me
this is me
who else could i be
i am what i am
i cant see anymore

this is me
what else do you want from me
this is who i am
i am not that little girl you want to see

this is me
and that is all i am going to be

some will like it some will hate it

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  • LadyOfFate
    November 13
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    This is me... It did not describe you as well as one would hope. You did not describe anything. Like do you cry when it rains? Or do you scream when no one is around because you can? Or dance around just feel the movement? You can elaborate this poem so much.