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Flight

Mouths moving a mile a minute,
The hallway, a highway of noise,
All I see is her standing there.
She stands there her beautiful brown hair,
Falls down her back,
Like a waterfall of silk.
She looks my direction,
And smiles,
I smile back.
The noise dissolves in the background,
As though it were ballroom music.
She stands there in a plain white t-shirt,
That’s all she needs.
Emotions flood my system,
Confusion, anxiety, fear, hope, joy, love.
I don’t know what to do.
My heart takes flight,
Her smile is enough to win me over.
Her pearly white gems perfectly aligned.
The bell shatters the moment,
She looks to me and waves.
I wave back, and walk to class.
I am late.

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  • Kathraina silver member
    October 1
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    Very vivid imagery here, and I like the flow.
    Nicely crafted piece

    bravo and thank you for entering



    ♥ kate

  • aww this is cute

  • Since youre helping me with the contest, ap removed your poems from the contest. sorry. but still mac...im sooo happy that you added this
    it makes me smile and wonder why i ever let you go..

  • Mac...i dont know what to say. i love that you added it