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Rain

Pitter-patter pitter pat
Drip drop splash
Hold your umbrella up high
And take heed of the wind.
Pat-pat pitter pat
Drip drop dribble
Tiny drops
Tumble to the ground
Refreshing and cleaning the world.
Patter, patter, pattering away
For a whole day, when I want to go play.
But,
Thump rumble thump-thump
Splat splish flash
Listen to that noise
And feel every drop
Of this wonderful, wet
Rain.

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One of my old poems. really not good.

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