Spinning, spinning
a circling web of weaving,
trapping, ensnaring,
admittedly he's daring.
Uncertain, confusion,
hesitating fusion.
Withdrawing, stalling
again he comes a calling
spiraling, dialing,
phone'll neve' ring
Author notes
Prompt spiral.
A contest entry
- Quickie by Shredmaster.
400 points, ended August 23, 9 entries
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Comments
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I liked where you took the prompt in this one, it was a really nice approach.
Rhyme really isn't my favorite style of poetry but the way it was written made it much more enjoyable. It was different than most rhyme poetry.
Thanks for entering, luck.
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