mustn't eat
can't admit defeat
if i let that food meat;
my chapping lips.
ballerina thin
swaying wind
guiding me
sweeping away my fallen hair
thining me down
delicate like a flower
wilting like a rose
my body's getting flatter
won't stop till i'm just;
skin and bones
ana can you hear me?
mia how about you?
i won't let you beat me
ED that goes for you too!
this is my own choice
it concerns none of you
won't stop till i'm barely living
paper thin
heroin thin
i'm not giving in: until;
i meat my goal.
your restraining my body
destroying my soul
i'll never be like everybody
i don't have control
wasting away
there will come a day
that you will loosen your hold
will it be to late
have i made a huge mistake
give me a sign
i know i'll be fine;
for now
your whispering in my ear
only things that i can hear
and boy are you making it clear
that i have nothing to fear
as long as i let you keep your hold;
tight around me.
Author notes
my hair my hair, is falling out again. i love my hair. but i wont eat.
hit your stomach when you feel hungry
take cold baths
run till you pass out
remember i never staid it would be easy
*~*bee*~*
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Comments
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Very nicely composed. I liked its musical effect.
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Strong Write....
..... but capitalization and usage are key to poetry. I notice that you used your when it should have You're, and found an i which should have been I, and don't get me wrong I make mistakes as well, but I am just trying to help you as well as I can. You rock though!
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wow;
strong words doll :/
i know all to well where your comeing from,
things will be better,
and im not gonna tell you the things i probley should,
anbd i know you dont wanna hear it,
so im just going to say this,
you are stronger then ana&&ed,
even if at times they get the best of you,
&& the write was simply stunning
love you bunches doll
-vanna -
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thank you :]
*~*bee*~*
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