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To find a Soul mate

Drowning in inconsistency,
starving for comprehension.
How does this happen ?
Worlds collapsed down
into moments in time, fragmented
by years of nothing,
just alone, breathing.
The universe transparent,
translucent, traced with
veins, trembling into life.
Words forged in single celled
life forms, just wriggling closer
to something,
writhing to not be so desperately
alone.

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  • zt
    August 28

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    I know it's easy for someone who is not out in that wasteland to say that you'll find water. I also know that it is incredibly difficult to believe that with a parched throat, such as yours. Try to bear in mind that the wounded and desperate tend to attract predators. Haven't you had your share of sharks? You're a beautiful, intelligent person. Focus on what really matters in your life. The sort of happiness you are looking for will not be found with a boyfriend. It really is up to you to make your own satisfaction in life. It's good to see you posting again and I do wish you well...