bmw
range rover
mercedes benz
rendezvous to boast
who possess the most
tame bodies
tame brains
so tame tame
tame bodies
tame brains
so vain vain
I mercedes
lust of ladies
especially THAT one
boutique lovechild shopping for jimmy choos
botox forehead
platinum highlights
bleached teeth
rolex wrist
obsessed by my logo since preteen
drive her and her girfriend
everywhere
silent witness to their after hours sex in MY backseat
what gorgeous unsuspecting blonde accessories
complementing my champagne beige exterior
sleek lines
unrivaled power
elite class
bmw chimes
I'm no nickels and dimes
check out my stud striking a pose at the bar
corvoissier in hand
cartier cuff links
armani suit
boss shirt
versace tie
gucci shoes
cavalli cologne
cancun tanned face
oh my grinning urban narcissus
revving my pistons
flashing my fog lights
so totally under my spell
always takes me and trophy girl to the best restaurants
jockeys me right up front on the curb
blatantly flaunts my downtown sexy cool
bogus logos
look at me
range rover suv
you can't compare THEM to MY love slave femme
look at her
ms. high maintenance
prada eyewear
lululemon form fitting yoga slims
pilates leanbody
silver bellyring
golden retriever
corporate hubby
private school brats
I LOVE her endless surface
nouveau riche bravado
nowhere does she motor without ME regaling her pedigree
Yo!
what's this?
class warefare?
I'm made in the shade cadillac escalade
white as blow
idling in front of starbucks
spinner hubcaps whirling like sparking diamond fans
check out MY hip hop antihero
projects diablo
wit da bling bling
strutting inside for his L.A. latte
scarface digs dolby surround sound
smell of luxurious leather
narcotic for his ghetto pain
I just ride him everywhere
dominate his ass
mr. product placement himself worships the asphalt I roll on
I'm pope of pimps
heaven on wheels
ssshhhhhhhhhhhh
they're coming back
act like objects
tame bodies
tame brains
so tame tame
tame bodies
tame brains
so vain vain
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Subaru lol.
Great choice of wording on your write. i thoroughly enjoyed it.
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I thoroughly enjoyed this. I think you nailed it. The choice of vehicles and the accessory people they personify were a perfect match. Very well done.
Mike
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Brilliant.
Im speechless.
keep writing!
x
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Wow....you are brilliant! I loved this poem.....Yup, loved it.
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Ssshhhhh!!
They might be listening! -
Sad.
Life is disgusting. Not so?
I shall never stop hoping ...
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Ha! Brilliant
What a fab poem! love it - thats really really clever! - You really got a 'rap' going there!
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You just wrote a poem about cars, discussing their brands, and I still find myself utterly captivated. Once again, brilliant!
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that's one modern poem!! so many references! and the way you write really speak of the relevance of perspective..well done
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