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expanding

today I'll be a sink
without a drain
as your water pours into me
I'll grow and expand
all I want
is you
to fill me up
with joy

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God - fill me up with You.

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  • unraveled
    August 22

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    Lovely, every time I read your poems I feel the sensation of "why didn't I think of that?" The drainless, filling sink is such a great image and idea. Ironic that the poem 'expanding' is so small, but that's all it really needs to say. You inspire me.

    -cassidy