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Strumming gently in my own soaked dreams


Strings ripped and soaked
Strumming gently in my own soaked dreams
Praying for some good lyrics
So I can write some sweet music
Arms open wide, eyes dead a nails
Waiting to embrace the stars and inhale
The rock god inside my soul
But soon enough, I’m jamming like jimmy page
And singing great like Billy ocean
But I don’t know what’s all the commotion
I’m not that ready to leave the stage
I got that the rhythm for sure
And I got my neighbours screaming outside
Jamming in the summertime
And strumming in a winters storm
I know most like zeppelin
But aerosmith are quite the norm

















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  • geckogirl silver member
    August 22

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    ahh you have written a really cool piece, there all my favourite muso's


  • Shredmaster
    August 22

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    It took me a while to figure out what I thought of this.
    I reread it a couple of times and I have to say I do like it. That's probably a lot to do with the rock gods involved in it

    Thanks for entering. Good luck.