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Where Are You, When I Need You?

Every second lost
To the abyss
Something seems
More amiss

Each moment I need you
Another calamity is caused
My heart beats too fast
My sanity becomes lost

To make reality, reality
To keep fantasy, a dream
You are the reminder
Unfortunately it may seem

But you're nowhere to be found
Where are you
My chain to reality
When I need you

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