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Rage

Rage is all I feel
I want to wrip open my own chest
With anger
Watch as crimson flows out
Then maybe I'll be normal

I want to scratch you
And carve into your flesh
Words do not describe the way I feel
"Break Everything"
That's all I hear

My mind plays tricks on me
"Scream so they will listen"
Is what it says to me
"Don't cry no one cares"
Make it stop!

I think you have pushed me to insanity
I love you
But look what you have done to me
I never knew I could hurt like this
I didn't know I had this kind of rage

Your life drapped over me like a blanket

Please tell me what you think

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  • Alexis.Kennedy silver member
    August 27
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    intense

    I like it alot. I can feel the frustration and anger in your words. Nice job chick.