Everyday I Pray that you see what a Beautiful person I am.
A woman,
a mother,
your friend.
Still
you hold Truth
to the bitterness,
jagged darkness
in your Heart towards me.
I don't understand and to be honest,
I'm tired of trying to figure out 'why'
Long before now, I blamed myself
for your actions,
when in reality
you aren't happy with yourself.
Your hatred and disrespect
is a reflection of how you really
feel about 'You'
I still try to hold on
by a mere thread
that has been coming loose
by the seams...
a long time now.
I'm not angry anymore,
nor am I hurt,
but my Flesh
feels sorry for you, because
after all is said and done.
You still don't get it, and
I have gotten my answer
within this Poem...of
Why You Won't Let Me...
Love You
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you don't Love yourself.
Left, with what I thought was Nothing,
is the beginning of something
New
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Left with what I thought was nothing....
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Hey
Here another poem I can relate to. Ure poetry is off da Chain n its beautiful. ure words speak for me in ure poems n how I feel bou my ex. U done a great job wit this poem and all ure writes. Outstanding Job with this poem Keep da ink flowing bc its alsome
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HIT HOME. AMAZING WRITE. GOD BLESS
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kudos!!!
i feel you to the veins and bone marrow..this is a great peace of art work...keep on my dea... -
Oh gosh this brings back memories for me. I can relate to this poem. This was my favorite part. Left, with what I thought was Nothing,
is the beginning of something
New
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Ur comment is appreciated
Thank you 
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Hey!!! I really liked the end of this poem. That you were able to answer the question. And I love this line: I still try to hold on
by a mere thread that has been coming loose by the seams...You still got it!
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Thank u punkin
I appreciate you always.
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Thank you. You answered a lot of questions for me without me even asking you. Epiphany, you dont know the help that you've given me.
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Thanks Kim
you truly are amazing and I appreciate your words my friend.
ALways,
e
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piffy [sissy] pooh
when in reality
you aren't happy with yourself.
Your hatred and disrespect
is a reflection of how you really
feel about 'You'
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yes. I am so glad you are seeing clearer and that you realize this, one can't be happy and love, if they can't love themselves and be happy with themselves first.
this is a raw emotional honest write...
thanks for sharing, reading this lets me know you are STRONG
and you will get what you deserve when you're ready
much luv miss diva 
Tasha
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Wow. This was...
powerful. I am amazed at the voice of sorrow and the voice of triumphance in this. You did a stunning job.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Thank u
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: O wow.
...i loved this write. once i saw the picture i was like alright i have to read it. and lucky for me it wasn't a burden. i loved every second the way it flowed. and i just love how it was simple but yet so much. something i could picture being performed on def jam poetry. just loved everything about it and the strong voice i pictured saying it.
well done. i look forward to reading more of your writes.
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thank u
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Wow this poem is really deep and truly comes from the heart. I understand everything because I have the same feelings as well. I think this was my most absolute favorite part!
"Long before now, I blamed myself
for your actions,
when in reality
you aren't happy with yourself."
I am sorry that your going through this...
you seem like a wonderful person and you deserve your happiness and you shouldn't let anyone come between you and anything else.
Great write though!
--take a look at my new ones. (:
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Hello
Thanks so much for ur time and comment on this piece. Im always appreciative of such.
Take care and please...don't be a stranger.
Ephiphany
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My Sis......Left with a new beginning is scary at first...but will give so much more after some time.....
I'm sorry you're going through such a rough period in your life..
Come over so I can you.
XXJeannette
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Thanks sissy poo
I appreciate the hug...very much needed 
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Sensational
This is a very heartfelt poem. I know this feeling well. It is sad, because no matter how much you want another person to feel a certain way about you, you can only control yourself. You are beautiful, glamorous, talented and well worth happiness. Don't let a man come between that unless he's damn worth it and if he is, he'll never stand in the way of you feeling important to him or your own life.
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Thank you always sis
this was very touching. You always make me smile and appreciate my talent
Much love always,
E
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Excellent!
A poignant piece that gives concrete reasons
to let go and start anew. I've gone through something
similar to what you describe. Blaming myself for the failures
and misery of those who are incapable of loving someone
because as you say,"they don't love themselves."
Life never promised us a bed of roses as the saying goes.
It's hard to dismiss all the blood sweat and tears you put
into a relationship over so many years.
The fact still remains, we must love ourselves first and
foremost. Maybe it's time to turn the page and start
a new chapter in your life. Otherwise you keep rewriting
the same old stale and unproductive outcome.
Brilliant poem with a lot of heart. "Keep your head up darling."
Love you,darell
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Thank you darell, and I will 'keep my head up'
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