your hands created
neither a dozen nor half a dozen
of moments that made
my body quiver.
nothing you created
i wanted in my mouth.
during my time with you
my taste buds hated me,
my gag reflex dropped
and i became excellent
at spitting.
Author notes
prompt; masterbake
ElectricBloom
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A contest entry
- Prewrite Quickie by Beautiful-N-Broken.
400 points, ended August 22, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrites. for my favorites ONLY. by sideways hourglass.
463 points, ended October 30, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i like it.
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okay. yuou are just amazing, you know that? congrats on the silverr!
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haha!
Haven't been around on here for a while, but you've been improving haven't you?
This one put a smile on my face
xx
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lol I love it! great job with your prompt. it's an amazing write! Thank you so much for sharing this. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
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tahahahah.
Just letting you know. You were beaten by just a toe with the winner of this.
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woah!
Awesome stuff.
hrmmm...
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Oh now you see, that is funny. You got me giggling away. Well done. best to you in the contest
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Is it bad that by the end of this I couldn't stop laughing.
Oh not at the poem itself, that's lovely, but the sentiment had me chuckling.
Good luck, though I don't think you'll need it.
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i see a trophy heading your way
she's gonna love this 
well done!
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