Here is our place
where love can sigh
within a melting sunset.
Smiles and kisses trace the sky
as senses slip into passion's textures.
For this night is set for love,
your whispers are fine breezes
that shiver along spine's curve.
The palms sway with casual nods
as our free spirits scoff wisdom's wild words.
Night curves it's precious colours,
the backdrop that shines anticipated promises.
Balmy wisps of warm air
suddenly explode expectancy's dance,
as the sands outline one shape
where desire's wings flutter.
In a list
A contest entry
- Love & Nature Picture Inspired by ennovy.
900 points, ended September 1, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Tell Me What You Think
Comments
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this is a beautiful take on this picture...
thank you for entering our contest ..novy & brazos
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Again...
This time it is your second stanza that could easily stand solo. But you poet thrill me over with your wordings to the simplest prompts.
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a good piece of poetry, ah to be there in that wonderful place, love the colour and scent of romance, and desire dreams of destiny's shimmered sighs. sunset smiles slide across the sensual sky.
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