The bright sun shone down on us
Touching every petal of every flower
A few white clouds drifted through the blue sky
And granted us a light summer shower
Sales for school supplies started
We watched as the leaves floated down
A serene autumn breeze blew them away
Coloring the wind red, gold, and brown
The temperature dropped; we put on our coats
Slowly the snow on the ground started to stick
We stuck out our tongues to catch the snowflakes
They touched our heat and melted very quick
Then warmth started to increase
Birds returned and began to sing
The winter snow had melted away
To reveal a beautiful spring
Author notes
The order: summer, autumn, winter, spring
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simple and nice.. I like this
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A wonderful picture you painted with words. The seasonal cycle captured in brief poetic thoughts. Excellent.
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Love Spring
best time of the year.
Good luck in the contest.
Jim
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Take Four
Atypical order except in so far as this poem was effectively written in August, thus conserving a certain logic however the seasons should be self explanatory without necessarily appearing directly outside the notes .
Words should be respected and overpopulating a poem is natural at 11 though as time goes on you will doubtless revise
The bright sun shone down on us
Touching every petal of every flower
A few white clouds drifted through the blue sky
And granted us a light summer shower
Bright sun shone down,
drenched every flower,
clouds cotten, blue sky,
then light shower.
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Very nice! Good Luck in the contest!
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winter wonderland
gifted words, you penned
a beauty like you hugs Angel♥
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A wonderful poem on the seasons. I enjoyed reading it. Thankyou for sharing.
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Nice. And you said I was dying for comments. Since when have you wanted comments? XD Wow. I could never rhyme as well as you. Keep it up!
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a very nice write...good luck
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Lovely rhyme!
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Nicely penned!! good luck
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I enjoyed the wander through a year in your life.So many never see the changes made, how very sad their lives must be , not to get a little of the pleasures each season brings
Beautiful
Good luck in the contest
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a great poem about the seasons. good luck in the contest
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Wonderful! You can see there is more to the seasons than just weather. I love how you made it rhyme! (I don't think I spelled that right...)
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