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Constant Sorrow!!!

Drab, dismal, defoliated, dull,
Dejected, deformed, dreary, doleful,
How miserable has become this life,
Without you, my kind father, my hope!

Every hope and mirth was associated with you!!!!

Every hope and mirth was associated with you,
And on your departure, delight has given adieu,
Forever, till I am alive on this earth,
Days are darks, and nights sorrowful!!!

Oh could you return in life again!!!!!!!!!

Oh could you return in life again,
I could see goodbye to colours dim and plain,
Your life was short, did not know,
And why my life is so long and bleak!

When will day come, when will I see,

The brightest countenance and shining eyes,
Of my dearest father, whom I love too much,
And has become hardest to survive without him!
May his noble soul rest in eternal peace (amen)

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  • Shamaila Khalid
    September 2
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    Perpetual sorrow

    Father's death is certainly a perpetual sorrow my dear Mujtaba... May God bless his soul with eternal peace (aamen)

  • Emotions
    August 29
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    extremely sad

    very sad and miserable description of inner feelings dear friend

  • Blue Eyed Boy
    August 29
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    excellent

    excellent dedicatio to great father!

  • Dancing Doll
    August 23
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    Awesome!

    Pathetic, miserable and touching poem Mujtaba