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our light

Our light

lost and alone
don't know where to go
a love betrayed
or so you say

your losing your faith
no chance to be saved
these words are spoken
a heart is broken

you cower up in fear of the truth
fearing you have everything to lose
That's the last thing I want you to do
Good or bad you get to choose

this isn't the worse thats happened to you
but you make it what you want it too
just take the time to see from my sight
maybe then you'll see the light

alone and confused
your heart feels abused
you think all hope is gone
but love carries on

you don't know how i feel
you say I'm faking the real
I've lost the spark
taker a closer look into the dark

The light is full of purity
like the ground after a snowy winters eve
easily razed by man, the sun, and rain
Or in this case, fear, mistrust, and pain

Sure the light has a brighter illuminate
but white is easier to contaminate
You still shield your eyes from the sun
but when it goes down, the light isn't done

its there in the moon
what does this mean to you
I'm hoping you'll say
it'll be okay

I just want you to know
my loves a new glow
the sun makes you frail
but moonlight's soft and pail

This is the way i show my love
like the silver goddess watching above
It wraps around you like the night
unlike apollo burning bright

For too much of love you're bound to get burned
I guess its a lesson of live and learn
its a little harder to show that i care
but I never said my love wasnt there

so keep up the hate
keep saying i made a mistake
keep on trying to ignore
je vous aime toujours

Just tell yourself I'm an ass
uncaring and without class
a dick down to the letter
if it makes you better

You can even think that I'm a disease
as long as you remember one thing for me
the sun isn't shining bright anymore
but does not the moonbeams make you soar

now when i see you bathed in twilight
like my love a lunar glow in the night
the sun will hurt your eyes eventually
but with my moonlight love you'll always be beautiful to me

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  • maktub
    August 22

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    hm...i liked it, but I have a short attention span. In order to hold me, you need to throw in details i dont expect, to draw me towards the end, or...shorten it. Otherwise, I enjoyed it.