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[ I had a dream one night that I would lose the love of my life ]

I had a dream one night that I would lose the love of my life
But also in that dream I found a way to put away my knife
The day it happened I had no clue what to do
But also that day I found someone who was new
After time I figured out what that dream had meant
That after I lost one gift a new one would be sent
He allowed me to put away my past and start a whole new life
And in this life I would be his amazing beautiful wife

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  • Silent Saint
    September 1

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    great job

    such memories are exactly what i am looking for. i cant realy say anythings wrong with it except it would have been entrancing it if was longer