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EGADS--
you're good at that
wrapping me happily
can you feel my heart beat?
We made a fort of sheets,
                        you silly fool, I love ya.
I giggle as you tickle me
and gasp between gaps
              in breathing,
and I'm grasping at
your strings of warmth--
It feels like I've been here before
and I can taste your beads of sweat
sliding like salty strings
o'er our countours.

I'm Yours.

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A contest entry

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