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Late April Landing

Three o’clock. Moonset then darkness.

Three-thirty. Ships stand to on the Aegean.

Steamboats stir, tug rowboats due east.

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Night smothers motion upon a black sea.

Forty a boat, all crammed in full kit,

hear throb of engine, hiss of steam, swish of bow.

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Searchlights sweep weakly upon watery miles.

Thousands of hearts skip their strong beat.

Sharp-eyed seamen trace line of dim coast.

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Four o’clock. First flare of dawn deepens to red.

“Smokes out! Cut the chat!” an officer murmurs.

“We’re going in soon.” Rifle butts shuffle.

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To a man they wonder, “Will we surprise them?"

They glimpse lie of land, its headlands and hills.

Steamboats drop tow-lines; water ahead’s clear.

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Soft dip of oars, alone, breaks through silence.

Boats move like matchsticks to a strange shore.

How peaceful the night, how beautiful is dawn!

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Fifty yards … forty, to breakers and beachhead.

“Bugger!” an officer curses, “We’re too far north."

Four-thirty. One shot, then hail of bullets in foam.

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“Johnny Turk’s onto us,” a private breathes, adding frankly,

“The bastards! But what a relief!”

“Shut yer mouth! Jump!” shouts his sergeant 

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who’s over the gunwale, shirt dark with blood.

Rifle held high, he struggles through surf to shore.

“You beaut!” he grunts, spray of bullets behind.

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Guns bark. Shingles spark. He sprints twelve yards,

flings himself down at base of firm sandhill,

fixes bayonet, hears mates nearby scream.

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“Strip packs. Ten rounds!” he roars, as ranks rally.

He tastes triumph, arm grazed, boot blasted off.

Bandaged, he’s chuffed they’ve won what he’s lost--

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a toe in the bloodied sand.

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  • Emmyb gold member
    October 2, 2009
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    very good


  • SomeonesToySoldier
    September 3, 2009

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    Interesting read. You really did well in pulling one little piece that soldiers most often notice right before battle. The beauty in nature. It kind of suprised me how the most simple pleasures were the ones most thought about when you were about to put it all on the line. Great job also building anticipation. Probably the single most destructive yet powerful aspects of a soldiers life before the battle. Good poem. Thank you for entering my contest.


    • Ronald Wiseman gold member
      September 13, 2009
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      Thank you for reading.

      This poem is about Australia's first overseas battle on Turkish shores, 1915. I lost two uncles there. One never made it to shore. Our Anzac Day ... a Remembrance Day ... was triggered by this World War I sacrifice.


  • myrataal gold member
    August 27, 2009

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    I read little of you, busy Editor ...

    but this poem told me you are still a penman at heart!

    Very well expressed and atmospheric. Surged onwards, waves to a shore, inevitably and fearlessly invading.

    Excellent.

    Love
    Myra

  • Purrsanthema
    August 24, 2009

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    It's so vivid! It puts one right in the midst of the action and changes war from a great vague act of brave sacrifice into a reality of quick thought, emotional impression and armed conflict. I love the realism. To me it echos what is most telling in the great WWI poets. Best of luck in the judging!


  • ronnica
    August 24, 2009

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    You almost took the reader to this beach landing, it was so involved, and excellent reading. I always feel so sad reading war poems.
    I know the Turks were a bloody hard-fighting lot, and that toe, sort of culls the bloody expectations with a mild smile at his being chuffed at such a small loss.


  • Topaze
    August 22, 2009
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    Very well done, an interesting read. My best wishes.


  • malmadre gold member
    August 22, 2009

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    Vivid description! you write it as if you lived it. The scene perfectly set with the mood created with the dialogue between the characters. Good, very good! deserving


  • paulcreates silver member
    August 22, 2009

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    Brilliant. You've put me right there onto the sea and pre-dawn shore. The expression and imagery is superb as they establish the beach head.
    I've often thought of those from so many countries who sacrifice for freedom.
    Great work.
    Paul

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