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mistake

vacantly i check the time
wishing once again that
you were mine.

my eyes are empty,
losing their spark
when you left me.

my heart is weak,
holding out for
love to speak.

my feet drag,
nowhere to go,
nothing to brag.

my mouth is sealed,
keeping me together,
longing to be healed.

vacantly i check the time,
remembering again that
you were mine.









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  • Haunted Doll
    August 22

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    i really enjoyed this. it was simple yet really hit home in a powerful way. the ending was great. "were mine".