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Mermaid Sea

The ocean sleeps sweet undulating slumber in a sea of mermaids.

A contest entry

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  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 6

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    This is lovely! I liked it a lot. Grats on the silver!



  • Desire gold member
    August 28

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    Sweet!!

    Oh My this is one Beauty of a one liner~
    Adore the Images also athe words:
    undulating slumber~

    Takes the Mind there
    And Mermaids always brings a smile
    Woot~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 22
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    excellent

    Enjoyed this one liner for the contest
    Best of luck in the contest
    Susan~~~


  • individuality gold member
    August 21

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    a good one liner, i feel like rocking on a sea shell now, curling up as the mermaids sing soft lullabies to ripple along the currents of moments where sleep dances into fine warm dreams.