Last night was a riot
Music booming out opened doors
Goths were in abundance
Black thigh high boots and corsets
Trench coats and steel caped boots
A rocking atmosphere hanging in the air
And a horde of bodies lining up for drinks
Smells assail you as you walk up the stairs
Smoke, perfume, liquor, cigarettes and sweat
Crowds headbanging on the dance floor
DJ, cranking up the music full ball
People screaming, drinking having a good time
Couples in each others laps, kiss with tongues dueling
As Disturbed, Cradle of Filth, Machine head and more
Echo loudly, surrounding the background with guitars
Last night was a riot
5 bottles of bourbon and some shots
Gorgeous male goths at every turn
Beautiful females with flowing hair and black eyeliner
Spilled drinks on the floor and shattered glass
But everyone still party's on
With their hips rocking from side to side
Bottles raised high in the air
Voices booming as they mouth the lyrics
The night continues to pulse with adrenaline
A charged atmosphere still lingers in the air
As everyone departs still rocking on in the streets
What did you think
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sounds like you had a blast
reading this was like being with you in the club... great imagery...
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Oh damns you made this sound like a hell of a time I wish I was there great write mommy
Searra
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i wants to be there....
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aws
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sounds like fun fun fun
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oh it was
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i like. you can hear the music coming through the poem. It also shows the energy you felt.
'Gorgeous male goths'?? well that is most definately a fresh description to me!
*Walks away muttering about calling males gorgeous*
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