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Would You Believe in Miracles (If I Told You That I Had One)

Hey there, you
How are you doing?
How are you feeling?
You're so quiet
So silent
That I can't help but wonder...

Who are you
And who will you be?
I love you, darlin'
Do you love me?

Can you hear me when I sing to you?
Can you feel me when I hold you tight?

I know your face better than my own
Although I've never seen it
And your voice is everything to me
Although I've never heard it
And I embrace you every day
Although I've never held you.

But soon you'll see that all these nevers
Will one day come to be
And never was I happier than
The day you're here with me.

Author notes

Well, this one's definitely different for me, because of the subject matter. A little info. Would you believe in miracles if I told you that I made one, that I had one, that even though I can't show you yet, I'll be able to so soon, so very soon? Because I do, and I have, and I will. I was married on May 16, 2009 to the man of my dreams, my college sweetheart, and I am 5 months pregnant, and although our financial circumstances are...well..pretty bad, we're still happy and hopeful. The due date is January 1, 2010, so who knows? I could be ringing in the New Year with a New Miracle! And even though I've never met my child, and I don't even know if it's a him or a her yet, I know I love him or her more than anything in the world...

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  • TheJoker
    August 22

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    I loves you pookums and you know I love your little hell raiser already as well... who knows one of these days our two lil ones will probably be reaking havok together as we did...loves you and it is beautiful.


  • mosher93
    August 22

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    Beautiful. That is different for you no doubt, but I love it. Its so heart felt and emotional. You can really feel the mood.


  • TragicTayx3
    August 22
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    AMAZING

    So beautiful! x3


  • individuality gold member
    August 21

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    a good poem, ah life, and love, and the creation thereof - being a man i can never feel the ways of woman with being pregnant and actually giving birth. so, soon new smiles will enter the world's ways. and life will be bouncing with joy.


  • FloridaBeachGirl
    August 21
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    very nice

    This baby will bring so many moments that will inspire more writing

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