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The Ringing in my Ears

I know there’s something wrong,
And it’s been wrong for years,
But this is nothing more
Than the ringing in my ears.
I know that it’s a lie,
But the truth I cannot find.
This is nothing more
Than the ache inside my mind.

There must be something real.
If only I could feel.
If only I could peel
My skin away, and show myself to you.
There must be something there.
If only someone cared.
If only I could share
My agony, that isn’t even true.

I know there’s something wrong,
And it’s been wrong for years,
But this is nothing more
Than the ringing in my ears.
I know that it’s a lie,
But the truth I cannot find.
This is nothing more
Than the ache inside my mind.

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  • Denerica
    August 22
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    You captured the feeling of the autism, so many different reactions. This is sincere. Well done. Blessings.