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Somebody Human

Won’t somebody human come and take my place?
Someone who’ll belong amongst the human race.
Please apply within for a place in time and space.
Won’t somebody human live behind this human face?
I wish that I was dying so that you could be alive:
Someone with the reason and the will to survive.
Please destroy my self, before I’m forced to try.
Live within my skin, and live behind my eyes.
Somebody, please: I am going insane.
Come and adopt my mortal pain.
Throw me away, as if I never were,
And all this time it was you that was lost in there.

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