The title says is.
Nobody is fooled.
But the title doesn't say it all.
As i walk there i see myself in the reflection or the window.
But why can't they see me.
But then i think.
There is only one reason they can't see me.
Because your not here with me.
Author notes
Nobody is fooled
A contest entry
- give me your all, of anything by x-evil cupid-x.
400 points, ended September 19, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very good, well done.
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wounderful write
so much feeling in so little words. If they read your poetry than they would know you cause you put so much of your self in your poems. -
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i never thought i put so much of me into my poems. but come to think of it i do. so i like it.
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