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Nobody is fooled

The title says is.
Nobody is fooled.
But the title doesn't say it all.

As i walk there i see myself in the reflection or the window.
But why can't they see me.
But then i think.
There is only one reason they can't see me.
Because your not here with me.

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Nobody is fooled

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  • x-evil cupid-x
    September 19
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    very good, well done.


  • Gamefreak
    August 27

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    wounderful write

    so much feeling in so little words. If they read your poetry than they would know you cause you put so much of your self in your poems.


    • kel dog
      August 28
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      i never thought i put so much of me into my poems. but come to think of it i do. so i like it.