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Endless Love

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Inspired by "Silent Gates" by shiratikva

 http://allpoetry.com/poem/5639643

 

 

from

'FLIGHT OF ANGELS' - volume iv, Eos

 

 

 

 

Did evolution's state become love's name?
as often reminisced like once awhile
indulged by your awareness, tho' the same,                           6035
'twas if we'd never met, yet versatile,
resounding joy it brought, it lit our flame.

A body language whose communique,
has reached, do certain atmospheres include,
the ethereal from which our earthly day,                                 6040
shall often beat the heart that we seclude
conditions that far mother worlds delay.

The eyes of gods are nowhere to be seen,
the touch of gods are felt like nothing could
become, though may it mimic having been,                            6045
I saw the very first time where you stood,
as touched by this concerning love between.

 

 

'Eternal Love' © 2009 Titus Llewellyn. (03.13 GMT - 22-08-09)

 

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  • Alexis-Rueal
    February 17

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    ***Sighs*** do you ever write a bad love poem? Don't answer, we know you don't. I agree that this piece is pretty much the heart of Eos. Oh, to be loved in this way... a girl can dream, can't she? Bravo, dear friend.


  • MelissaluvzSheila gold member
    February 14

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    The flow was amazing and the piece was just as good, I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.


  • Archangel Knight
    January 7
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    WONDERFUL!!!!! Perfect flow

  • Qwerty Quill
    September 10, 2009

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    I am new ..

    ... above is my very first comment and the three applauds that I ticked didn't show .... sorry.   I shall improve ... hopefully !   

     

    QQ  

     

     

     

     

  • Qwerty Quill
    September 10, 2009
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    *****

    This is magical ... so eloquent and inspiring. No forced rhyming here which is difficult to avoid at times.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 10, 2009

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    As always your rhyme, flow and lines take preminence in a read, and this endearing write is polished and a delightful heartfelt penning!


  • CassidyForever-x
    September 9, 2009
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    amazing.

    im speechless.


  • dark morbid angel16
    September 9, 2009
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    enchanting

    This piece leaves my heart wistful.


  • Pkwiki
    September 9, 2009

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    Brilliant

    Like the rest of your works, this leaves me astounded.
    You are truly one of the best poets I have ever read, ser.
    I wish I could leave a comment that would give this poem justice, but its 2am.


  • myrataal gold member
    September 9, 2009

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    Simply Divine ...

    What a very good read to be saturated in before I go to bed ...

    Congratulations on your Gold, Poet.

    Love
    Myra


  • cosmicrose
    September 9, 2009

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    Yet endless love exists independent of human awareness or experience... meant to be perceived during loftier pursuits of spirituality... yea... the quest of souls to find such as this... whilst still wearing their monkeysuit is endless as well.


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    September 9, 2009

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    I love this piece its truly romantic and very beautiful!!! I love the way this is written and portrayed!!!

  • msjuicytech
    September 9, 2009
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    What can I say to sum up this marvelous convey???


  • rollingzen
    September 9, 2009
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    good stuff


  • solzhenitsyn08
    September 9, 2009

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    The Gods all three in one

    "The eyes of gods are nowhere to be seen," say your line and add as a mathematical necessity or obligation, adding: "the touch of gods are felt like nothing" that fortified the meaning of the poem "touched" the reader "by this concerning love between" the eyes which can see the beauty here and your poem.
    Many thanks poet friend!



  • shiratikva
    August 23, 2009

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    Congratulations for the Gold!!!
    I knew it...
    I think, this piece will be a "heart" of your "Eos"

  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    August 23, 2009

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    Tony, this is just absolutely beautiful. I am speechless beyond words.
    How am I to write a review on this? It is impossible, just know that you have
    touched my soul deeply with your words... but then you already knew that
    didn't you.

    Love,

    Suzi


  • SilentFairyNat
    August 23, 2009

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    beautiful

    really amazing!!!u will b a gr8 inspiration for me.good luck 4 da contest

  • Poetryintheblood
    August 23, 2009

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    Ah, I knew from the first lines this was your penning Tony, as you never cease to amaze me with your beautiful words, thank you for this amazing piece and good luck in my contest, Josie


  • ronnica
    August 22, 2009

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    I had to read this when I saw the title, Endless Love. (Tho' I often wonder if anyone would want such a mad gift.) I am lost in your words unsure if this is love persued, or persuing.


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    August 21, 2009
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    Beautiful and well done!


  • jinsays gold member
    August 21, 2009

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    nobody does it like you Tony.
    Love to you always.
    Jin


  • shiratikva
    August 21, 2009
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    I loved your words...
    I love the rhyming scheme...
    my favorite lines:
    "The eyes of gods are nowhere to be seen,
    the touch of gods are felt like nothing could"
    Beautifuly done...
    I'm glad that my piece could inspire you for such a wonderful poem
    Thanks for sharing my dear friend

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