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Me... (A demon revived...)

Feeling empty, and everything’s a miss... I went to far, to let it end like this... They grab me, and hold me down... In my own blood to suffer and drown... In my mind time stands still... Down my spine flows a chill... As wings of darkness, fly out of my soul... Spread wide, and as black as coal... Pushing my enemies back, and away... I slowly stand only to display... Eyes that burn, and tears of red... They soon realize, that there all dead... They turn to escape my fiery gaze... Yet I flap my wings, and set them ablaze... There tormented screams dance upon my ears... Revealing there darkest of fears... Now enlightened I begin to see... The darkest fears... They all were... Me... A demon revived...

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  • Punkrocker1991
    October 15

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    this is a great poem. i love it. i know how you feel.

  • WOW! I loved this! It was so dark but yet so well written! I loved reading this! You had excellent emotions and fantastic imagery here. BRAVO! keep up the good work!