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Why I Love My Friends

My whole world crashes.
To whom do I turn?
3 people in the world,
They stand by me firm.
My best friend, my wifey, and the boy that I care.
They listen to me say 'it just isn't fair.'

'just one quick text, that's all I need.'
Quickly turns into a plane ride to see me.
You don't know how much I aprreciate this.
It's you being here that I truly miss.

Another quick text to it best friend seems fit.
In my aggravation, the wall I hit.
You knew his family better than I do.
It's just not right. Were you related too?

And the person that's left, all I can say,
He's really great. To him a never ending debt I cannot pay.
He listens to me rant, he listens to me rave.
But in my time of need, he really does save.

3 very different people, to whom I all care.
I'm very lucky with them, life to share.
I love how all everything is crashing around,
But I look to my sides and suddenly I'm proud.

They really don't know
How much I love them all so.
Well, here it is,
Life without them would be hard to live

Author notes

This poem was wrote the night that I found out my uncle died and I couldn't get to sleep. I was thinking of 4 people, 2 of which are combined into the one person mentioned, and though I was feeling more miserable*still am*than i ever have in my life, I knew that because of those 4 people, I would be OK.

I know it's kinda awkward and all, but....

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Summerge
    October 10

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    Gina

    Other than some misspelling alone the way this was a really good poem. Sometimes the best things are brought out of us when we are in a vunerable state. You really brought it forth.