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The Eye of the Storm



The clouds look angry

A spot in the sky

Of discontent

No solemn gray

But tortured and swirling

Like a soul with an anxious mind

When worry takes over

And it can be seen all over the body

By an observer who truly cares enough to look

And notice

When the one caught in the turmoil

Cannot see from their blinders

And instead are wrapped in the brewing storm

So take notice!

Help the third eye see what clouded vision cannot

Be the eye instead of the storm





© M/Gatlianne 2009

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  • poet-wyatt
    August 26
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    I will look at clouds with a new understanding...

    I like the subtheme of choices, of selfish wants that blind us to others hurts as well as their joys...Very good G

  • adeline nothing
    August 21

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    This is lovely. I love the tie between nature and people. Nature is one of my favorite topics. This is just so well-written and heart-felt.

    "Be the eye instead of the storm."

    I loved that line. Just perfect! Great write!