looking into your eyes
I've found genuineness and modesty
something I've never saw before
for the words you speak
so luscious and sweet
the lips i once kissed
so soft and tender
why do everyday i lie to myself
when everyone knows i care
this lust i have for you is not going away
ad these feelings are here to stay
when you make me smile
its like the sun coming out of a rainy day
why didnt you just stay
if i could only explain how much you mean to me
oh if only you could see
your the star i once wished upon
the moonlight above leading the way out of a darken night
as i wake up from this desirous dream
all the words once spoken become silent
lips i kissed before become forsaken to feel
but all those days i lied to myself when now its too late
everyone else saw how i felt
this lust i have is still not going away
and these feelings of love for you is as bright as day
the smiles i once had turned to tears of bitterness
hopefully they will fade away
even if i fight this there is always going to be a place in
my broken heart where you lay
even if you never feel the same again
memories will stay within
Author notes
hahahaha just got bored and started writing and all of this just came to me like i felt liike this all along but i guess idk i just try to write how other pple might compare to while writing about how i feel and this like i siad just came to me when i started writing hope its alright tell me what you think...........
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A contest entry
- It's You That I Desire! by Poetryintheblood.
900 points, ended August 26, 20 entries
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Comments
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Very nicely done. I lik it a lot.
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it describes my situation...he's leaving [moving away] now and i'm stuck not telling him and denying it's true. maybe it is cliche, but still it seems very relatable. nicely done
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I would proofread this again... there are some awkward wordings that take away from the reading of the poem, such as "Why do everyday I lie to myself," and "something I've never saw before."
Also, I'm not sure the character here has really overcome the situation and moved on. Good poem though, lets me know how you're feeling, if slightly cliche in places -
Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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