Nine months crawled so slowly by
We were waiting to say, "Hi"
Started out a bloody mess
Next day in a pretty dress.
Fifteen years have passed since that day
We have loved you in every way
You are the young lady to be
And have grown up so splendidly.
Watching you grow has brought me such joy
I Thank God you weren't a little boy
Cause, I was first blessed with your brother
Could two good boys go to one mother?
You are so pretty, then and now
Brother and I, we made a vow
Boys will pay if they dare come near
Louie will make them shed a tear.
So stay away from them boys
Think of them as silly toys
Best you leave them all alone
Or big bro will call them home.
Author notes
hehehehehe - This was fun but truly why I hate rhyme. Some are so cheesy, but I just couldn't help it. Made me laugh for about 13 hours at work today. 
A cheesy gift for Shrat's Birthday
Comments
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Fun write here. Nice to see you posting something new. I'm a little surprised it is in rhyme based on your stated dislike, but it's a fun piece and I think you have to try out rhyme more often!!
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Haha. Thanks mom, except for the whole having louie throw me on the ground and you beting me part, it was a pretty good birthday I must say. Especially my headphones! So amazing. Anywho, I love this poem, and yes, I will stay away from the boys. I promise. Luv ya. *squeeze* bye!
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