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Run

Darkness consumes the creatures who follow in its path,
Like a lost lamb listening for the cries of its mother,
In vain, in pain,
We all find out who we really are.
We all don't wish to come back.

I watched a cougar stalk its prey,
Sink its teeth into the flesh and I could taste the blood.
Yes, my crimson lips taste so good,
And if I open wide, maybe you can see the whole that is left in me.

I don't wish to be anybody,
(Run) I wish to be nothing at all.
I don't wish to hurt anybody,
(Run) I wish to not hurt at all.
But like a storm cloud your silly little words won't chase me away.

"Rain, rain go away."

I don't want to hear me anymore.
I only want to (run).

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I haven't written anything in a long time. I guess that's a good thing..

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  • MyZeroForever
    August 21

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    I love you very much<3
    Ok? More than anything in the world.
    And I will always be here for you, I promise.

    • why thank you darlin

      • but when you comment my poem your suppose to comment the poem =/

        • MyZeroForever
          August 21
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          LOL xD
          my bad
          well, its very dark=/
          it makes me sad, i dont want you to be sad. i want you to write happy stuff but this is good, because your releasing everything!!
          I like the cougar part though xD its so cool :]

          • lol i was just thinking about that cuz wes always watches animal planet..idk. i cant write happy things haha. even if i try it comes out all blah

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