Inhale poetry's metaphors
where weaves the dark and light,
let eyes dance, picking petals of truth
shunning darkened tunes.
The senses understand the whispers
as eyes are bared to facing facts,
but darkness weaves it's tricky shadows
erase them and truth is clear.
Author notes
"First defense against evil - Open your damn eyes."
-Reese, Forever Knights
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A contest entry
- Quote Contest by Kari.
700 points, ended August 26, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wham! and Bam!
That's telling them kiddo. Short, pointed and telling. Good work.
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Excellent
Oh my poetry metaphors as defense. Very creative and so unique. Best of luck in the contest.
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A wonderful piece for this quote, you captured the raw darkness in this one. Well done and best to you in this contest
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a good poem penned, ah yes, let the metaphoric language slide from the mind towards the poetry viewed with wide-open eyes, don't stop to blink, just stare and laugh like love.
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