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My thoughts

Love is when you care more about someone else's happiness than your own,
You would do anything for them,
You'd rather be with them than anyone else in the world,
You would die so they could live,
When you lose them it feels like you lose yourself,
They the only thing you can ever think of,
You never even dream of being with anyone else, because they everything you want,
They have many faults, but your blind to them,
You would take them back no matter what they do,
When youre with them it's the happiest times of your life,
but when youre without them it feels like there is this great big hole in you
You always wanna be in their arms,
Everything reminds you of them,
You miss them the second they leave,
you're always worried about them
there is something in you just burning so deeply
you cannot even begin to describe it
you want to be the one they turn to
you want to be the one they trust
they can hurt you so much
but you choose to pretend they don't
just in case it would hurt them or your relationship
no matter what, they mean the world to you
and you always want to protect them
you wish you could take their pain from them
even if it means feeling it yourself
they do not have to return your love for you to feel this way
They make your life complete
and you cannot imagine them not being in it

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  • BabeyGirl
    November 18

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    wow

    this is exactly true.. i no how this feels... the worst part to me is when they dont want yu back anymore.. how do yu just move on and try and live wit out them... i really like tis poem.. i hope yu dont lose the person you wrote this about...

  • This is very true. I agree with you. I like the emotion and words spoken in this piece.


  • Greenemo
    August 21

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    hmmmm....

    that is so true.... your thoughts are jut like mine sorta.... lil too much <.<.... GEET OUTTA MAH HEAD!!!!! AHHHHHHHH *hides*