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Love

Love is you.
Love is me.
Love is something you can't see.
Love is nice.
Love is sweet.
Love will sweep you off your feet.
Love is soft.
Love is best.
You can feel love in your chest.
Love is great.
Love is kind.
Love is always on my mind.
Love is special.
Love you chearish.
My love for you will never parish.

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  • Greenemo
    August 21

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    :)

    i like it very much but may i suggest something?

    you have a pattern with the word "is" then you change to "you". i suggest you change "you to "is" and "chearish" to "cherished"

    "Love is always on my mind.
    Love is special.
    Love you chearish."

    very great poem though ^^