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Shirtless Sinner

The bruises on your shoulder are tacky and worthless.
You're blatantly shirtless,to show where you've been,
  as if I deserve this.
First time you've heard this?
I highly doubt.
You've always got your body on someone else's mouth.
I have been your mistress more times than I can count.
Why on earth did I assume that with me you'd settle down?

I don't claim to be a saint, I've sinned, and sexed, and shouted.
But at least I have the decency to be discrete about it.
I'm done with games "so and so" names,
  I no longer wish to fight.
What's done is the dark will soon be sparked,
  and always brought to the light.

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  • Xxcant runxX
    August 21
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    i love this its filled with so much emotion great job


  • Badass Brea
    August 21

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    I love this ALOT!
    You can't tame people, no matter how hard you try. I knew a man like that. I had to have my heart broken many times before I finally walked away & found myself a man that is faithful, but I still am insecure & jealous even though I know he would never hurt me.

    I loved the almost flawless rhyme flow & the way you write! You're very honest, yet you let us read into some of your pain without over exposing your soul to us, the readers that is.

    Great write
    Brea


  • Beatles Girl
    August 21
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    i loved it....


  • TwiztidMaggot
    August 21
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    I can definately relate tot his. You did an amazing job writing this! Keep up your amazing work!!!!

    TwiztidMaggot


  • JackJumper silver member
    August 21
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    the things people put up with!
    the more you let somone mentally torture you
    the worse the mental torture gets.

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