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Our Love is

our love is so powerful
we make mends meet
a flower petal heart
a crimson kiss so sweet

a velvet touch of your hand
across my cheek so dear
our eyes light up
every time we are near

a gentle hug
a silent move
your arms around me so close
they hold me so tight

the look in your eyes
the way that you smile
baby you know
you make my life worth wild

so little time and
so much to say
thats why i tell you i love you
everyday

those three simple words
have a deep meaning and true
and i really mean them
when i say them to you

the thunder and lightening
the good times and the bad
some how we pull through
with what love that we have

so many would have given up
on a relationship like ours
but our love is really deep
its really meaningful above stars

your beautiful brown eyes
they take me by surprise
and every time i look them
i have no doubt that they are not disguised

baby yes i love you
more then anything in this world
more then what any book
or any person can say

baby my sweet love
my heart i give it to you
because i trust you not to break it
i trust you to keep it safe

so i give you the key to my heart
its filled with love, secrets, and memories
just for you...so keep it safe
and treasured forever baby i do

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  • DreamMountain
    November 13
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    aww, love is so powerful

  • aww. very romantic!!! i like how the last 2 stanzas dont rhyme . charlie has definitally treated u rite ♥