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Moroues Display

 

 

Dark clouds lay low in the sky

 

above the soul weeping willow tree

 

well murky puddles form on the earth below

 

there are no wild flowers blooming her today

 

for the air lingers in a moroues display

 

heavers looming dark and gray

 

as the murky water seeps away.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Sentimentalpoet
    August 21
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    good work

    well i like the back ground very much. this poem is great . good job.