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~A Beautiful, Last Goodbye~

My wrist drips juicy, crimson tears of pain
Flowing like a shallow creak....
Drip,      Drip,      Drip
As it lands on my bedroom floor,
leaving the remains of my suffering
It flows like the beating of my heart...
never stopping.....
Thoughts of the afterlife running through my mind...
A beautiful release from the prison my soul cant escape from...
The gloreous icy sting of my pain vanishing from my empty being
My lungs failing...rejected the air that kindly wants to fill my lungs
Drip,      Drip,      Drip
my crimson tears are like my poetry...
bleeding tradgedy and suffering...
As I lay down and weep
and think of the past
one question crossed my mind
as I close my eyes forever...
"If love is a battlefield, who is the winner?
Is it the person who gives their heart as a token,
or the one than breaks it beyond repair?"




~This is something I wrote and it's my quote so dont steal it without saying I wrote it!!

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  • crosmyhearthope2die
    October 23
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    this is beautiful


  • Sara-Ann
    September 23
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    im speechless this was an amazing poem.i can't wait to read more of your stuff.


  • barelyXbreathing
    September 4
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    I love it. its descriptive and beautiful. very dark and slightly romantic. a really good poem.


  • Grape of Ember
    September 3

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    MY OH MY sister dear this is an awesome poem truely love it




    Ember


  • Gothic-lolita
    August 30

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    hey twinny love the poem and your qoute was beautiful it speaks the truth i give it an A++


  • angelfalls.silently
    August 21
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    Awwwww

    that was so beautiful and so sad... i loved it


  • halfpast4ever
    August 21

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    wow

    If love is a battlefield, who is the winner?Is it the person who gives their heart as a token,or the one than breaks it beyond repair?" I love that line, your poem has such emotion in it. I can feel your pain, I can see the picture your trying to create. You have a wonderful way with words, I only hope that you won't actually go that far. If you ever need anyone to talk to I'm here.

    <3kari


  • Zeke864
    August 21
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    wow, this is great, no awesome. no, i don't even know the correct word. awesome job.(>^-^<)


  • Breathe.Into.Me
    August 20
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    No words could express how amazing this write is. Great job :]

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