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My Babies Breath

Like an ocean and its puffs of mist
Anchored in the flower beds
And armadas of small sailing ships
Floating over seas of green

Like white sapphires in a waterfall
Cascading over unicorns
And the fountain spray of bubbles
Forming a silv'ry sheen

Like warm breath on the cold glass
Of Jack Frost's crystal charms
And the snowflakes falling just outside
Covering the earthly scars

Like a flock of angels rising up to heaven
On the splashes of mermaids
And the old geysers sudden soliloquy
An exhortation to the stars

There is nothing quite as precious
as my babies breath

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Baby’s-breath
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  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 28

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    Beautifully written!
    I really love the visuals conveyed
    here; it really makes the write
    stand out. Lovely thoughts
    expressed here too.

    Best of luck & thanks for entering


  • csmmoms2
    August 20
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    Jeremy
    This is really beautiful...pure poetry. And you do have a way with words. You're on roll now!
    -c