Bound and writhing
against taunts of pleasures
seduced by pain.
Yellow, floating through
in a moment of fear.
A cry out in warning...
yet quickly dismissed
in the solace of his touch.
Painting the canvas
with the tease of cool ice
followed by warm breath
on flesh of trembling desire.
Agony sends her mind reeling
off the cliff of total rapture.
Ache consumes her whole;
provoking whimpers of pure bliss.
Bringing the taste
of his control replete
in her submission.
Hours pass in a fleeting minute.
Her past and future flash before her eyes.
Ashes from burning embers of carnal heat
fall softly to the comfort of his arms...
and she thinks,
maybe, just maybe,
she could get use to this.
Author notes
Torment (definition but do not use this word in the poem)
1 : the infliction of torture (as by rack or wheel)
2 : extreme pain or anguish of body or mind : agony
3 : a source of vexation or pain
Use of the following words IN the poem:
Replete
Taste
Rapture
Ice
Ashes
Yellow
Minute
Future
Warning
Maybe
In a list
A contest entry
- The Erotic Challenge (Round 3) by Corvus Corone.
600 points, ended October 5, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
All comments are welcome!
Comments
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very good dear flower
applause for your write
and congratulations on your silver trophy.
...the taste of his control...
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I apologise for my delay in judging due to illness. Master Ktulu has restarted the Erotic Challenge so I am judging this as an ordinary contest.
A lovely use of the words given and a well developed and well structured poem. The sensual imagery flows beautifully from line to line.
Well done
CC
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I love this...very good use of the word bank. Very good imagery as well. I think you aced this.
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Thanks!
I had forgotten that this contest had not been judged yet...my writing has been slow of late, i enjoyed writing this one ...imagery is what i have been working on...glad it came through!
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Ashes from burning ember of carnal heat. Very nice line. Bound and writhing against taunts of pleasure, seduced by pain. Expressed very well. Sounds so wonderful. Im jealous.
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Won't go into a lot of detail here....memories....been while good write
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all used....
but not all used up...maybe more?
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ooooh, I like this alot..the tempo and sound, the contrast of pleasure and pain. Your words held my attention and expressed it all very clearly to me. A wonderful write, much luck in the challenge.
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You have definitely captured both the utter torment yet blissful feeling of being teased hehe...great job.
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