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Did I let you go or Did you leave me?

Woke up pretty late,
never slept like that before..
never wish to woke up..
never thought it could happend.

Open my eyes, see a red blood sea..
confused and sad..
feel something coming out from core..
could it be you?

Dont know, Dont wish..
please tell me it wasnt you..

A pain in my chest when I saw
that red little ball that came from me..
could it be a baby?

It could be..but why me?
Trust me if it was you,
I never thought of giving you away..
or wake up and see you leave..

But if it wasnt you?..
what could it be?..

What could it be?..the reason
that brought pain, loneliness
and sharp feelings..also doubt..

Did I let you go or Did you leave me?

Please forgive me if I did let you go,
and if you left...why you did it?...

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