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*All I Want is You*

We're good friends, you know this is true,
I hope one day you'll know I'm thinking of you.
My mind seems blurry, lost, opaque,
My heart seems distant, plastic..fake.

This Feeling I have will never stand broken,
I need these thoughts out loud to be spoken.
You mean more to I than I did forsee
It's True that your my Kingdom's Key.

Wake me up, when my mind has been set,
Explain to me why my eyes remains wet.
For this to work, it needs only two,
Understand, All I Want Is You.

Help me, Free Me, let me fly,
away to my dreams, under an orange sky.
Can't You see, what I must do,
Let out my feelings, 'I love You'.

So now the darkness consumes my fate,
the castle is locked by the Iron Gate,
I fear this is something I would never have to do,
But my heart will not lie; All I want is You...

Author notes

Well, This poem was a quick draft, but I thought I would post it
It's very dear to my heart, It's based entirly around my life and feelings towards this boy who happens to be a close friend...
The ''KINGDOM KEY'' is a play off of Kingdom Hearts - One of My fave PS2 games
Both me and the boy the poem is about like K.H and so I incorperated it into the poem.
If you have any questions, give me a shout xx

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